My dinner with Atila

[Looksmax Refugee]

Looksmax Refugee and his Girlfriend Ling Ling are meeting Atila and Sabine for dinner. They are meeting at a steakhouse. Both couples are sitting opposite from each other

Sabine: Thank you so much for coming, Looksmax and Ling Ling. Me and Atila have something very important to talk to you about.

Looksmax: Oh anything for our two closest friends! Now what could it be?

Sabine: Blushes. Welll ummmm so basically the thing is......

Lookmax: With a confused look. Yeah well, spit it out?

Atila: Well you see curryboi.. oh I mean Looksmax. The thing is that we have a stalker.

Ling Ling: Clenched fists covering mouth. Oh nooooo that's terrible! Don't tell me it's that infamous stalker all over the news right now?

Atila: Yeah... that's the one

Looksmax Refugee: No! You couldn't be talking about "Cornelius!"

Atila and Sabine look down

Ling Ling: Well that's terrible, but why are you telling us? You guys need to go to the police as soon as possible!

Sabine: Sobbing. Well yesterday that monster already got to Atila!

Looksmax: Got to him?

Atila: With tears rolling down his cheek and his nose running. LOOKSMAX BROTHER! THAT FAT PIECE OF SHIT. HE SNUCK UP ON ME WHEN I LEAST SUSPECTED. HE PINNED ME DOWN AND LAYED PIPE IN ME. I CAN'T LET HIM GET AWAY WITH ITTTTTT!!!!!!!! HE VIOLATED MEEEE!!!!! KILL HIM! AS MY BROTHER LOOKSMAX, I AM ASKING YOU TO KILL HIM!!

LIKE FOR PART 2

 

[milkistermoo]

That doesn't sound like Atila at all, make it realistic atleast.

 

[Looksmax Refugee]

That doesn't sound like Atila at all, make it realistic atleast.

Atila is my sworn brother in this universe

 

[Muri]

Lmao

 

[『 』]

HE PINNED ME AND DOWN AND LAYED PIPE IN ME. I CAN'T LET HIM GET AWAY WITH ITTTTTT!!!!!!!! HE VIOLATED MEEEE!!!!!

 

[『 』]

NEXT TIME ON THE NEETS.me SERIES

Gaymax Endorser: NOOOOO HE’S STICKING HIS COCK IN MY ASS, WHY DID I EVER AGREE TO EATING PEACH HÄGEN DÄÄS AT HIS HOUSE

 

[WeebHunter3000]

Me trying to find the funny

 

[『 』]

Me trying to find the funny

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[Looksmax Refugee]

Me trying to find the funny

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Was it really that bad

It was supposed to be a swingers meeting at first, but i felt bad and changed the plot

 

[『 』]

Was it really that bad

It was supposed to be a swingers meeting at first, but i felt bad and changed the plot

No Faglover9000 is just bitter and resentful about most things

 

[Looksmax Refugee]

No Faglover9000 is just bitter and resentful about most things

Okay GOOD I was close to roping because I put a lot of creative effort into the dialogue, only for it to be so easily diregarded

 

[Khaos]

Was it really that bad

It was supposed to be a swingers meeting at first, but i felt bad and changed the plot

Well your writing skills aren't bad... but the whole plot is basically a yaoi fantasy

 

[Looksmax Refugee]

Well your writing skills aren't bad... but the whole plot is basically a yaoi fantasy
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It's actually a rape mystery
But okay

 

[Khaos]

It's actually a rape mystery
But okay

My bad never knew this was a genre. Looking forward to part two of this captivating mystery of who took atila's booty

 

[Looksmax Refugee]

My bad never knew this was a genre. Looking forward to part two of this captivating mystery of who took atila's booty

Well part two is cancelled after I got ratio'd, criticized, made fun of
Never writing another fanfic
Putting down the pen right here
I fucking hate weebhunter with a passion
I will train martial art and strangle anyone that talks shit
Trying to entertain people just puts in your in a vulnerable state as proven with weebhunters comments
I am hatemaxxing and killing everyone

 

[Khaos]

Well part two is cancelled after I got ratio'd, criticized, made fun of
Never writing another fanfic
Putting down the pen right here
I fucking hate weebhunter with a passion
I will train martial art and strangle anyone that talks shit
Trying to entertain people just puts in your in a vulnerable state as proven with weebhunters comments
I am hatemaxxing and killing everyone
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Oh come on the reception wasn't that bad. Anyways if you're putting down the pen better make sure you delicately do so in your gentleman's high class pencil case.

 

[Looksmax Refugee]

Oh come on the reception wasn't that bad. Anyways if you're putting down the pen better make sure you delicately do so in your gentleman's high class pencil case.

Good one

 

[WeebHunter3000]

Well part two is cancelled after I got ratio'd, criticized, made fun of
Never writing another fanfic
Putting down the pen right here
I fucking hate weebhunter with a passion
I will train martial art and strangle anyone that talks shit
Trying to entertain people just puts in your in a vulnerable state as proven with weebhunters comments
I am hatemaxxing and killing everyone
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If it makes you feel better, I only insult people that deserve it.

 

[Fimbultyr]

If it makes you feel better, I only insult people that deserve it.

Man you've got so much negative-energy.
Maybe you should consider having a talk with our local love-cult-leader @Pegasus

 

[Looksmax Refugee]

Man you've got so much negative-energy.
Maybe you should consider having a talk with our local love-cult-leader @Pegasus

HE A BITTER GRINCH LOSER
MORE THAN ANYTHING I WANT TO TEAR HIM APART PIECE BY PIECE, LIMB FROM LIMB, THEN I'LL DEVOUR HIM
I'LL RIP HIM TO SHREDS AND THROW HIS FLESH AROUND LIKE CONFETTI

 

[『 』]

When’s part 2 coming out?

Also you have unfinished business with your other stories

I look forward to seeing your work

 

[Khaos]

Man you've got so much negative-energy.
Maybe you should consider having a talk with our local love-cult-leader @Pegasus

Never heard of her

 

[Kevin Logan]

It's actually a rape mystery
But okay

How its a mystery if we already know who is the rapists?

 

[Looksmax Refugee]

How its a mystery if we already know who is the rapists?

I guess rape revenge story is more accurate

 

[『 』]

I guess rape revenge story is more accurate

Looksmax Refugee rapes Cornelius

STAY TUNED

 

[Khaos]

I guess rape revenge story is more accurate

Now I'm curious were you going to rape him back or what? Idc if you got ratiod drop part 2 asap

 

[Kevin Logan]

I guess rape revenge story is more accurate

>rape revenge

So, how exactly you will rape neetgod?

 

[Looksmax Refugee]

>rape revenge

So, how exactly you will rape neetgod?

I haven't thought that far ahead unfortunately

 

[Atila]

no tag no care

 

[Neetgod]

Looksmax Refugee and his Girlfriend Ling Ling are meeting Atila and Sabine for dinner. They are meeting at a steakhouse. Both couples are sitting opposite from each other

Sabine: Thank you so much for coming, Looksmax and Ling Ling. Me and Atila have something very important to talk to you about.

Looksmax: Oh anything for our two closest friends! Now what could it be?

Sabine: Blushes. Welll ummmm so basically the thing is......

Lookmax: With a confused look. Yeah well, spit it out?

Atila: Well you see curryboi.. oh I mean Looksmax. The thing is that we have a stalker.

Ling Ling: Clenched fists covering mouth. Oh nooooo that's terrible! Don't tell me it's that infamous stalker all over the news right now?

Atila: Yeah... that's the one

Looksmax Refugee: No! You couldn't be talking about "Cornelius!"

Atila and Sabine look down

Ling Ling: Well that's terrible, but why are you telling us? You guys need to go to the police as soon as possible!

Sabine: Sobbing. Well yesterday that monster already got to Atila!

Looksmax: Got to him?

Atila: With tears rolling down his cheek and his nose running. LOOKSMAX BROTHER! THAT FAT PIECE OF SHIT. HE SNUCK UP ON ME WHEN I LEAST SUSPECTED. HE PINNED ME DOWN AND LAYED PIPE IN ME. I CAN'T LET HIM GET AWAY WITH ITTTTTT!!!!!!!! HE VIOLATED MEEEE!!!!! KILL HIM! AS MY BROTHER LOOKSMAX, I AM ASKING YOU TO KILL HIM!!

LIKE FOR PART 2

It's true my name is Cornelius Bartholomew I'm a billionaire philanthropist you must of met my evil gay identical twin brother vanguard Shrewsbury he's a real sex nymph twink he will lay pipe in any curry boy be careful